WRITING A SPEECH
A speech is an
official verbal presentation that is meant to achieve a certain goal.
The main aim or objective of a speech is:
- To convince your audience to buy into your idea or pay attention to a certain goal
- To make a good impression
- To leave your audience with 2 or 3 takeaways
Words are powerful tools that can move a whole nation or even the whole of humanity. The pen is mightier than the sword. Great orators have always used words to influence large masses of people. These include Barack Obama, Martin Luther King, Malcolm X, Franklin D. Roosevelt, Adolf Hitler, John F. Kennedy, Kijana Wamalwa, PLO Lumumba etc.
Your speech should
sound like a real person talking.
Steps to writing an effective speech
- Identify the purpose of your speech
- Analyze your audience
- Condense your message to the basics
- Strike the right tone.
- Pull them in with your introduction
- Your message should flow perfectly and fluently
- End strong
HOW TO WRITE A POWERFUL SPEECH
The idea is to capture the attention of the audience very
early on. Deliver a memorable beginning, clear middle and structured ending.
Preparation for writing a speech
Know
your audience
Do an audience analysis
What are they looking for? Pay attention to their needs
Required
length for delivery
Know the time limit. Keep your speech short and sweet.
Purpose/topic
of the speech
What are you trying to do with your speech? Educate,
inspire, entertain, argue a point etc. Choose your topic and main points your
speech will cover
The goal (aim/objective) dictates the tone and structure.
Define the purpose of the speech. Organize it properly.
In your initial planning, you may ask yourself the questions
– Why? Who? What?
Why am I writing the speech?
- What do I want to achieve?
- Why am I speaking?
- What is the purpose of the speech?
What is the speech about?
- What is the main message and key points?
- What specific action is implied?
- What level of information should I include?
- What is important to them?
Who am I talking to?
- Who are the audience?
- Whom do I represent?
- What do I know about them? (Their culture, language, level of expertise, age, interests)
- How much influence do they have?
Structure/format of a speech
An effective speech must engage the audience and hold their
attention from start to end. It usually has three distinct parts:
- Introduction
- Main body
- Conclusion
Introduction
Your introduction must be powerful enough to hook your
audience’s attention and pique their curiosity.
Make the opening few seconds MEMORABLE.
Use a bold statement to grab the ATTENTION of the audience.
“So, first of all, let me assert my firm
belief that the only thing we have to fear is … fear itself -” Franklin D. Roosevelt (March 4, 1933)
Use NUMBERS to reinforce your point e.g. “After
this speech, 50% of you will go out and subscribe to Wekati Wafula YouTube
Channel”
The audience will be dying to know:
- Who are you?
- Introduce yourself. State something that establishes credibility.
- Why are you giving the speech?
- Introduce your topic and state the purpose of the speech. Make the topic relatable.
- Preview the main points.
Use the INTRO formula to write a powerful speech
introduction
Interest
Give the audience a reason to listen to you. Introduce
yourself in a confident and clear manner.
Needs
How does the audience benefit from your speech? Remind the
audience the reason for your speech.
Time
State the length of the speech at the beginning.
Route map
State the main points so that the audience can know which
sections of the speech are important “I will cover 3 main points”
Objective
Clearly state the objective e.g. “By the end of the speech,
I would like to …”
Main
body
Here you deliver your main message. Introduce the SUBJECT
and REASON for the speech.
Present your thesis or argument and support your material in
a simple, organized manner.
Share 2-4 points. Provide one piece of information at a
time. Don’t overwhelm your audience with too many points.
Convey your ideas logically and provide sufficient
supporting evidence to back the ideas. Give examples, data, or illustrations to
back your main point. The illustration should be simple, memorable and
meaningful.
Paragraphs should follow a pattern of cause and effect.
Use clear logical transitions from idea to idea.
Incorporate rhetorical strategies (ethos, pathos, logos) to
convince your audience.
Include your own anecdotes and personal thoughts. Use
images, jokes and rhetorical questions to keep your audience engaged.
Use simple language and quotes from simple speeches that
your listeners can relate to. Focus on powerful words e.g. “A
change is brought about because ordinary people do extraordinary things” Barack Obama.
Condense big ideas into a few memorable words e.g. “I
have a dream”, “And so, my fellow Americans, ask not what your country can do
for you, ask what you can do for your country”
Conclusion
What do you want your audience to walk out of the room
remembering?
The closing statement should be IMPACTFUL.
The ending is an opportunity to:
- Leave your audience with a lasting impression of your speech.
- Summarise your speech by restating the main points
- Give one or two takeaways.
- Provide a call-to-action with a strong closing statement to help your audience remember big ideas
- Thank the audience for taking the time to listen
Methods to end your speech
- Quotation
close – use a famous quote
- Bookend
close – refer back to an opening statement and repeat it or add a
few extra words to elaborate on it.
- Open
Question – ask the audience a proactive question
- Call-to-Action – ask
the audience to perform some tasks on the back of your speech
REMEMBER: the attention span of your audience is greatest at
the beginning, reduces at the middle and picks up again at the end when they
know you are about to finish.
TIPS FOR WRITING A GREAT SPEECH
Introduce
yourself
Greet the audience and introduce yourself
Make a
great opening statement
Begin in a catchy way to captivate your audience
Keep you opening brief
“I am happy to join with you today in what
will go down in history as the greatest demonstration for freedom in the
history of our nation.
Five score years ago, a great American, in whose symbolic
shadow we stand today, signed the Emancipation Proclamation. This momentous
decree came as a great beacon of hope to millions of slaves, who had
been seared in the flames of withering injustice. It came
as a joyous daybreak to end the long night of their captivity.”
Martin Luther King Jr (1963)
Employ language techniques
- A rhetorical question
- To make the audience think
- Ask a question that your audience wants to know the answer to. They will pay attention. Provide the answer in your speech to keep your audience hooked.
- A surprising statement
- This is a powerful tool to make the audience sit up and pay attention
- Share a shocking fact or statistic
- A famous quote
- Use a relevant quote to demonstrate your creativity and flair
- Story
- Tell a humorous anecdote related to your big idea
The opening statement should effectively grab the attention
of the audience
Strike
the right tone
Understand your audience and their needs
Meet their expectations – inform, motivate, entertain or
challenge them.
Leave the audience with a smile and a greater sense of hope
and purpose.
Split your speech into introduction, body and conclusion.
Your audience expects a clear path and destination so keep
it simple.
Use transitions.
Express
your opinion
Write about your topic
Say what you think about it
Be persuasive
Use
emotive language
Use words that evoke emotions in order to cause an emotional
response in the audience.
Your diction should persuade the audience.
Use emotive words purposefully. Don’t overuse them.
“But one hundred years later, the Negro is still not
free. One hundred years later, the life of the Negro is still sadly
crippled by the manacle of segregation and the chains of discrimination.
One hundred years later, the Negro lives on a lonely island of poverty
in the midst of a vast ocean of material prosperity. One hundred years
later, the Negro is still languishing in the corners of American society
and finds himself an exile in his own land. So we have come here today
to dramatize a shameful condition.”
Stay
focused on the topic
Keep it short. This is their time, not yours. Don’t derail.
Repeat
yourself
Repeat keywords, phrases, themes and critical points.
Repetition is for emphasis
It makes your speech memorable and interesting
“But one hundred years later, the Negro is still
not free. One hundred years later, the life of the Negro is still sadly
crippled by the manacle of segregation and the chains of discrimination. One
hundred years later, the Negro lives on a lonely island of poverty in the
midst of a vast ocean of material prosperity. One hundred years later,
the Negro is still languishing in the corners of American society and finds himself
an exile in his own land. So we have come here today to dramatize a shameful
condition.”
“Let freedom
ring from the mighty mountains of New York.
Let freedom ring from the heightening Alleghenies of Pennsylvania.
Let freedom ring from the snow-capped Rockies of Colorado.
Let freedom ring from the curvaceous slopes of California.
But
not only that, let freedom, ring from Stone Mountain of Georgia.
Let freedom ring from every hill and molehill of Mississippi and every
mountainside.”
Use
contrast
Use contrasting statements.
Use
figurative language e.g. similes, metaphors and other imagery
It helps to create powerful images in the audience’s mind
“But we refuse to believe that the bank of justice is
bankrupt. We refuse to believe that there are insufficient funds in the great
vaults of opportunity of this nation. So we have come to cash this check, a
check that will give us upon demand the riches of freedom and security
of justice.”
Engage
your audience
Write from the first person point of view. Use “I” as you
write/speak.
Address your audience directly.
Use “we” and “you” in your writing e.g. “As
a school, we need to plant more trees.”
Use 2-3 rhetorical questions throughout your speech - one in
each paragraph.
Humanize
your speech
Use personal details and anecdotes
Make your audience relate to you by telling short amusing
stories about real incidents about yourself and your family. Provide some
personal details. They are more likely to agree with you if they relate to you.
Act like you are having a casual chatter with a friend
Be memorable
Condense your
theme into a 15-word epigram. Use metaphors,
analogies, surprise, axioms etc. preferably near the end.
“Success is not final, failure is not fatal: it is the courage to continue that counts.” Winston Churchill
End strong
Finish with a
memorable statement
“When we let freedom ring, when we let it ring from every tenement and every hamlet, from every state and every city, we will be able to speed up that day when all of God’s children, black men and white men, Jews and Gentiles, Protestants and Catholics, will be able to join hands and sing in the words of the old Negro spiritual, “Free at last, free at last. Thank God Almighty, we are free at last!””
FUNCTIONAL WRITING: KCSE PAST QUESTIONS ON SPEECH
KCSE ENGLISH PAPER ONE 2022
Imagine you are the school captain. The school is holding
its annual prize giving day and you are required to make a speech during the
occasion. Expected guests include the County Director of Education, parents and
members of the School Board of Management.
Write down the speech. Ensure your speech addresses issues
of discipline, academic performance, co-curricula activities and students' welfare.
KCSE ENGLISH PAPER ONE 2017
Imagine that you are a former drug addict
who has recovered after spending three months in a rehabilitation centre. You have
been invited to a youth forum to talk about ways of preventing drug and
substance abuse among the youth.
Write down the speech you would deliver
during the occasion. Students, the County Director of Education, teachers and
some school principals will attend.
KCSE ENGLISH PAPER ONE 2010
You are the chairperson of the Environmental Club which has just been newly introduced in your school. There is going to be an official launching of the club. Write a brief speech you will deliver at the launch. Your speech should include the following: introduction, club officials, the objectives (aims) of the club, the activities to be carried out, conditions for membership, enrolment and any other relevant information.
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